Airie (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} airie_fairy) wrote in kiwi_ficjournal, |
Your narrative is gorgeous. The scene in darkness where they reminisce about the citadel was amazingly beautiful, distractingly so from all the jaw-dropping unease of the rest of the story, which was excellent in its darkness that made me so very, very sad.
MARTHA! That screwed me up for the rest of the story. Though as much as I'd have liked there to be a way to circumvent that universe-destruction/Martha (and everybody else) killing/apocalypse-ness, at least the Doctor didn't become a superhero for thirty seconds. OH GOD WHY.
MARTHA! That screwed me up for the rest of the story. Though as much as I'd have liked there to be a way to circumvent that universe-destruction/Martha (and everybody else) killing/apocalypse-ness, at least the Doctor didn't become a superhero for thirty seconds. OH GOD WHY.
